Difference between revisions of "Talk:History of Computers - Transistors"
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| + | First of all, the introduction should not have a large title, it should just be a paragraph before the rest of the article. Also the "Importance" should be titled "Significance," and "Links" and "References" should be two different parts. Your piece needs more information in its overview as well as its significance, and it also needs references within the page. The time period of your piece should be included. And finally you need to have your name on the page. | ||
Latest revision as of 10:02, 29 September 2008
Will Brown
Needs references in text!!!
Wren's Comment
This page needs some work.
First of all, the introduction should not have a large title, it should just be a paragraph before the rest of the article. Also the "Importance" should be titled "Significance," and "Links" and "References" should be two different parts. Your piece needs more information in its overview as well as its significance, and it also needs references within the page. The time period of your piece should be included. And finally you need to have your name on the page.
